Classmates Native American Essays :)

Gabriela Sanchez :)
Gabriela's essay about the Native Americans was very very good. I can tell that she knew this topic a lot. It seemed like she knew what she was talking about. I liked that she posted a photograph of an indian when he had his hair cut off to be assimilated to the white americans. Shee explained how native americans were treated by the white americans and in what ways they were assimilated.

Mariah Carolina :)
Mariah's essay of the native americans is another essay that i enjoyed reading. she was very organizeed when talking of the events that occured with the white americans and Native Americans. She explained how did indians learn to scalp and i think thats very important for other people to know because some people are very imature at this topic and will say that the indians were the ones who started that, which they didn't.

Roxanne Fuentees :)
Her Native American essay was really interesting. I liked how she started from how the Native Americans were before the White Americans came.She explained how the Native Americans lived and how happy they were. She explained how the White Americans lied about the Indians. They told they were savages and arrogant. She did a good job.

Ivania Colon :)

I really like ivania's essay. It gave me goosebumps to remember how Native Americans used to live in their own respected land. She did a good job explaining how they used to live and how they ended up living. The Native Americans didn't deserve to live that way.

Karlitza :)
I loved her essay, she was really creative. She explained how native americans were treated by watching a movie and explaining what happened, which was the exact thing. The movie was "Bury my Heart at Wounded Knee". I like that she atleast posted a photograph to support her essay. her essay post was very good.